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The War of Hyrule (The Legend of Zelda Online) Box Cover Comments
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This is my first box. I was originally just making the front picture for something else, but I decided to try and make a box. Forgive the lame template. I'll get a better one later.
I know there are a few problems, but for a first box, I'm okay with it.
I'd love to hear comments, positive and negative.
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is this like a mmorpg?
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#2, Yep. I wanted to make it PC based (For when Nintendo is out of the console department) but I couldn't find a template. So I just used a Wii one.
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Alright, knowing that I can help you.
(I'm going to try and not sound like a snobbish dick haha)
On the cover you shouldn't have shown the characters, but I guess Princess Zelda would look fine.
On the back is were you should show your characters, I'm assuming that each one would be like a "race" or something right?
With that in mind you should try making a table show casing all of the "Races" and/or "Clans" with there names under them.
The background on the back isn't all to great, I would suggest sticking with the overall gold color layout. Wiiboard was a good idea though, you should try putting it in one of the corners (maybe top left?)
Also, hahaha, you should try a different font and maybe put the summary into another table. Give the screenshots borders, there's actually some nice LoZ borders in LK's Resource Thred in the forums. You should check them out.
Ehh, i could go onbut i don't want to be rude.
All in all it's a nice first box and I'm glad to see that you're actually trying and you aren't just another Troll.
Haha welcome to the site :D
P.S. you can Personal Message me anytime you'd like for help. My real account's name is Techne, but i can't use it till christmas.
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Thanks a lot man! I'll definitely try a better version of this box.
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ok, first of all,welcome to this site.
seeing techne already helped alot, i only have things to add.
-don't use lots of different coloured text.
-add a texture or something to the front to not make it look so plain.
if you need extra help,feel free to PM me.
good luck,
-Ayron
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oooooh an MMORPG Zelda game. Wonderful idea :D Not a bad box too.
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#7, agreed. it would be really cool too. choose your race, class and all that jazz. good first box.
oh, put the "game experience my change during online play" under the esrb rating. oother than that its uber
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Id play it.
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