#10 we understand this is your first box but you dont need to keep going on about it!
When people criticized my first box, i didnt keep whining "waa this is my first box, be nice to me!" Instead, i just got on with it!!
Ok whats wrong with it...
- The template is blurry, low quality and choppy! Get a new template from here link
- The nintendo logo aint usually transparent on game boxes! You need to fill the middle in white
- The Bowser needs to be cut better! As your using paint, you can see that some of the colour has gone from his back spikes! Surely you noticed this but you didn't bother to fill it in for some reason?
- The background is blurry and is hard to tell what it is! Search around the internet for a better background
- As #5 said, you need to sort the wi-fi logo out! The text should be white!
So yeah thats about it!
I would usually give a box like this 1/5 but it is your first box and i suppose its not a bad effort! Its MUCH better than some of the other peoples first boxes (noticably Windows Vista for DS) so yeah im gonna give it 2.5/5
Listen to what i said though, improve your box, update your box, and maybe you will get higher ratings!
#1 Way to advertise for your own box in his thread O_o
#13 Cool, in that case, I'll just wait for you to finish updating it before I comment on it too much...it's not too bad as is, but once you fix the things Cerium mentioned it'll be MUCH better ^_^
u want to see a real bowser game go to this link
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good title tho
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sorry its my first box
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no, no it is still good. I'm just saying use this one as a model. this is a great first box. dont slam urself down.
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it's cool, except the wi-fi logo 4/5
:D
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#5 Just the wi-fi logo?
What about the Nintendo logo, The Bowser image, the background, and the template? =/
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whats wrong about them?
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Well, yes.
That too. but this is a great first box
Edited at 1 decade ago
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can you please cutout the bowser better, get a better template, and make it so that bowser isnt floating in the sky? 2/5
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first: whats wrong about it?
second: its my first box
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#10 we understand this is your first box but you dont need to keep going on about it!
When people criticized my first box, i didnt keep whining "waa this is my first box, be nice to me!" Instead, i just got on with it!!
Ok whats wrong with it...
- The template is blurry, low quality and choppy! Get a new template from here link
- The nintendo logo aint usually transparent on game boxes! You need to fill the middle in white
- The Bowser needs to be cut better! As your using paint, you can see that some of the colour has gone from his back spikes! Surely you noticed this but you didn't bother to fill it in for some reason?
- The background is blurry and is hard to tell what it is! Search around the internet for a better background
- As #5 said, you need to sort the wi-fi logo out! The text should be white!
So yeah thats about it!
I would usually give a box like this 1/5 but it is your first box and i suppose its not a bad effort! Its MUCH better than some of the other peoples first boxes (noticably Windows Vista for DS) so yeah im gonna give it 2.5/5
Listen to what i said though, improve your box, update your box, and maybe you will get higher ratings!
Im trying to help you, not be horrible!
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listen, this is a great idea for a game. you're only going to get better. i like it
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ok thanks cerium, i will update it
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#1 Way to advertise for your own box in his thread O_o
#13 Cool, in that case, I'll just wait for you to finish updating it before I comment on it too much...it's not too bad as is, but once you fix the things Cerium mentioned it'll be MUCH better ^_^
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#1, that box is even worse.
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#15 lolz
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#15, lmao! oh and i agree with #11, and dat once u finish the updates, this will look good
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second try
sorry about the bowser SLIGHTLY bad cut
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Template credit goes to Koopadasher
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It looks very much better now :)
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much better
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your first box looks way better then mine
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i only got to see the most recent outcome...
I wanna see the first one but this is very good.
Keep it up, its good.
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cool!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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