Woohoo! Another box from me! I really like how this one turned out.
Credit to Fb1 for logo
Credit to Koopa for Template and Luigi render
Credit to Planet Renders for the other characters.
Credit to Star89er, MARKER, Ayron, and everyone else who critiqued it in the forums.
One of the best Brawl boxes on the site so far!
Few minor things wrong with it though thats stopping me giving a fav
- The SSBB logo goes over the template
- No wi-fi logo
- Im not too keen on the Collectors Edition font on the front
this is pretty awesome, but i would have liked it better if you put some light in the middle - you know, like used the paintbrush at 300 and just make it bright and such. that would make it stand out to me. 5/5 as is though, and, guess what? +fav
20....I'm just saying it LOOKS like a gradient, if it's all filters and lighting, I can make that quite quickly in Photoshop myself with gradients. It looks like a grad with fiber or something.
I like your boxes, it's just this one isn't very good.
Oh, wait. Both you guys already faved my Brawl box. :P I hope this one, mine, and Muggles' satire all get in the Hall. (Well, we know Muggles' will. Could I borrow 4 of those 20 favs?)
The back text on the top is a little weird. I like the screen shots though, the background on the back should match the front i think and the front looks a little to much like koopadashers and i dislike how much of the box you got from sources. I would like to see more randering and stuff from you. Other than that its ok, could use some work.
Oh and i think the logo shouldn't come off the image area, but it doesn't really matter.
It's a well-designed enough box-art. Doesn't particularly LOOK like a Collector's Edition box being so simple. But that's my only gripe. The design itself is excellent.
Nice box but, the typeface at the back for description is copyrighted Sony Material. I guess Sony might sue Nintendo for that in real life. lol. Doesnt really look like a collector's edition.
Nice :D
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Woohoo! Another box from me! I really like how this one turned out.
Credit to Fb1 for logo
Credit to Koopa for Template and Luigi render
Credit to Planet Renders for the other characters.
Credit to Star89er, MARKER, Ayron, and everyone else who critiqued it in the forums.
Please somment and critique!
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Very nice.
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Heh. Just how I pictured it.
Ya know, it's kinda wierd how out of the recent Brawl boxes, collector's editions seem to be the best.
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Nice! 5/5
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One of the best Brawl boxes on the site so far!
Few minor things wrong with it though thats stopping me giving a fav
- The SSBB logo goes over the template
- No wi-fi logo
- Im not too keen on the Collectors Edition font on the front
4/5
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I don't like how Mario and Luigi seem to be attracting all the attention, but hotdiggitydog! 5/5 + fav
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#7 Why wouldn't they?!
They are the stars of the show after all!! Super Mario Bros!
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#8, true dat. i give it a 4.5/5. same thing with what #6 said.
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It's pretty cool. The back needs more work though :(
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great VGM!
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#6, Logo's suppossed to go over template. Like Some SMG boxes.
Oops, forgot wi-fi logo.
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wow 5/5 +fav
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this is pretty awesome, but i would have liked it better if you put some light in the middle - you know, like used the paintbrush at 300 and just make it bright and such. that would make it stand out to me. 5/5 as is though, and, guess what? +fav
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I wanted the light source to be comeing from the DEV logo corner.
Thanks for the comments and faves
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Eh...really not your best, it just seems to be a bunch of renders slapped on a gradient.
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#16, there is no gradient. I messed around with lights and filters for this.
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I just noticed something. to the right of the box, (outside of it) there's some wierd pink brush stroke.
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The front looks exactly like a gradient...
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#19, want proof?
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whats a gradient?
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i really like that luigi render O__o
great box btw
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Thanks man
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20....I'm just saying it LOOKS like a gradient, if it's all filters and lighting, I can make that quite quickly in Photoshop myself with gradients. It looks like a grad with fiber or something.
I like your boxes, it's just this one isn't very good.
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K, sorry bout that. I don't want to get too defensive...
I'm not, but the way I said it it makes me sound that way.
DON'T HATE ME!
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25, no problemo, I sometimes get defensive, it's not a problem with me.
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great job. looks nice and clean :)
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Thanks LK. Glad you like it.
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only 6 more....an i still love that luigi render!
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#29, heh. This a 'you scratch my back, I'll scratch yours' kinda thing? lol
Thanks man.
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#30, I wish someone would scratch my back...
Oh, wait. Both you guys already faved my Brawl box. :P I hope this one, mine, and Muggles' satire all get in the Hall. (Well, we know Muggles' will. Could I borrow 4 of those 20 favs?)
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#31 believe me if i had 4 or so fav capabilitibilitibilities i would give them to u.
in c4life's words we are triple trouble
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Sorry to bump, but I am, I hate it when I'm so close and then it all stops. I HATE doing this, but...
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#33, *shakes head*
Jk, jk, this is a great box, but as you said in your banner, it doesn't matter if it makes it into the Hall or not.
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give this hall....and while your at it...my legend of vgba one too. anyways i think this box does deserve it...
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#34, I know, but I hate it when something I work soooo hard on gets sooooo close (I consider 4 away close).
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Did you make the Luigi yourself?
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#37, Nah, Koopa rendered it.
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Add a Wifi logo and i'll fav it =D
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Happy?
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#40 Very =]
+fav
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wow, this box is crazy stupid retarded nice
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#43, wow, umm, is that a good thing? lol
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i AM hinting O__o
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#43, hell yea its a good thing!!!!
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i told u hinting was hood when u hav 3 arms
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The back text on the top is a little weird. I like the screen shots though, the background on the back should match the front i think and the front looks a little to much like koopadashers and i dislike how much of the box you got from sources. I would like to see more randering and stuff from you. Other than that its ok, could use some work.
Oh and i think the logo shouldn't come off the image area, but it doesn't really matter.
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#47, I made this before Koopadasher actually
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i think you did so good
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Very well done VGMaster, and congratulation on the HoF.
(+ fav)
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Thanks.
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It's a well-designed enough box-art. Doesn't particularly LOOK like a Collector's Edition box being so simple. But that's my only gripe. The design itself is excellent.
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Nice box but, the typeface at the back for description is copyrighted Sony Material. I guess Sony might sue Nintendo for that in real life. lol. Doesnt really look like a collector's edition.
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fav
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#54, Please can you post something more useful? It gets a bit annoying when you just post that as much as you do.
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#55,sorry.
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wow! :) how did you make luigi!
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the luigi is hardcore! faved!
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