ok first off i hate the faded charcters, i dont know who suggested it for you, the background for the back is realy bad. The back summarys good but the font is realy bad, i dont like the title over the template, and last but not least the template says its 1 player on the back. ok therfore a 2.5/5 (edit the back and the rating would be a lot better)
-The transparent Luigi DOESN'T fit in
-Weird bubble thingie around Samus doesn't look so hot
-The characters look randomly placed
-The background for both sides looks bad
-Screenshots should have borders
-Text is okay, but the font is HUGE, and it doesn't look that great
-Glow on the title is weird
-You should have more going on in the back
Definetely not your best, but I suppose you worked hard. Sorry, but a 2/5 for now.
You should think about updating this after the duel is over.
It's okay. I have to say that I don't approve of the generic "group shot" style that is used so frequently for Smash Bros. boxes on here, and the design overlaying everything is a little out of place. I think it'd look a lot better if Luigi were facing the other way, but then you'd have to edit the L on his hat. It'd be a lot of work.
It's not as good as your Mario Galaxy box, but it's certainly not bad.
Front design is pretty solid, but don't go overboard with the transparencies. I suggest having a smaller paragraph font size for the back. But overall, nice work.
My Duel Box againt Saint
Credits to:
Koopa Dasher- Temp.
Planetrenders- Renders
I like how this came out, i hope you do to!
Please comment and rate.
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Nice 5/5
But it looks like luigi is weird, i don't know why...
It's good
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#2,Thanks! Maybe because he is faded?
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nice but you should change the font on the back so if you change it 4/5
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ok prepare yourseld KHK lol,
ok first off i hate the faded charcters, i dont know who suggested it for you, the background for the back is realy bad. The back summarys good but the font is realy bad, i dont like the title over the template, and last but not least the template says its 1 player on the back. ok therfore a 2.5/5 (edit the back and the rating would be a lot better)
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Okay, I have some input as well:
-The transparent Luigi DOESN'T fit in
-Weird bubble thingie around Samus doesn't look so hot
-The characters look randomly placed
-The background for both sides looks bad
-Screenshots should have borders
-Text is okay, but the font is HUGE, and it doesn't look that great
-Glow on the title is weird
-You should have more going on in the back
Definetely not your best, but I suppose you worked hard. Sorry, but a 2/5 for now.
You should think about updating this after the duel is over.
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Wow and I thought i actually did good on a box. =/
EDIT: The font is TOO big?
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i think your improving a lot , seriously.
but i dislike the transparent Luigi
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#8, doesnt everyone?
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ok, i think this is one of your better ones, your galaxy box was your best, but oh well:
bad background on back
font size too big
front seems too crowded
wifi logo seems too big
dont like faded characters
sorry! it's not horrible, and i saw your page. you want to get a HoF box. Sorry, this won't make the cut. 3.5/5
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#10, Thanks for your input.
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It's okay. I have to say that I don't approve of the generic "group shot" style that is used so frequently for Smash Bros. boxes on here, and the design overlaying everything is a little out of place. I think it'd look a lot better if Luigi were facing the other way, but then you'd have to edit the L on his hat. It'd be a lot of work.
It's not as good as your Mario Galaxy box, but it's certainly not bad.
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#12, Thanks again. Do you think it would look better if I just
un-faded everyone and flipped luigi around?
EDIT: Our duel is up so go vote
link
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Front design is pretty solid, but don't go overboard with the transparencies. I suggest having a smaller paragraph font size for the back. But overall, nice work.
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#14, Thanks and i think i am going to un-fade them or whatver and fix up the paragraph and stuff like that. I appreciate the comment.
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