-Try just having one of the main character on the front.
-The Square-Enix logo is a bit squished and could definitely be more visible.
-Oval shape in the front shouldn't overlap with the esrb...ever.
-Some front temp problems to the right abound.
Back
-Decrease dark outerglow on tagline text or change to a lighter color.
-Decrease paragraph text size on the back. (try wrapping it around the characters somehow)
-Change the gritty-ish outerglow on the screenstrip, go for a smoother approach.
-Make the back bottom game info more readable and place the appropriate esrb there (it shouldn't look the same as the one in the front)
Ofcourse, I've said these to only serve for your improvement, hope I didn't sound too harsh XD But yeah, lookin' forward to your next box and keep up the great work, m8! ;)
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second kind half assed it thats gonna cost me lol
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It's not bad :)
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thanks mabye it aint so bad
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not bad for a 2nd ... keep it up seems like ur on the right track i like the back picture
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Ah, vera nice indeed :)
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thanks #5,4 anything i can do to make my boxes better
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Aight then, prepare yourself :)
Front
-Try just having one of the main character on the front.
-The Square-Enix logo is a bit squished and could definitely be more visible.
-Oval shape in the front shouldn't overlap with the esrb...ever.
-Some front temp problems to the right abound.
Back
-Decrease dark outerglow on tagline text or change to a lighter color.
-Decrease paragraph text size on the back. (try wrapping it around the characters somehow)
-Change the gritty-ish outerglow on the screenstrip, go for a smoother approach.
-Make the back bottom game info more readable and place the appropriate esrb there (it shouldn't look the same as the one in the front)
Ofcourse, I've said these to only serve for your improvement, hope I didn't sound too harsh XD But yeah, lookin' forward to your next box and keep up the great work, m8! ;)
P.S. I'm not THAT lenient...mwuahahah XD
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thanks so much, i'll make sur to apply those to my next box ...and its not harsh its perfect advice
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yeah LK got it pretty much down ...maybe update this one ...if not i'm lookin forward to ur next box
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