@2, Batman: Knightfall was an event that happened in the Batman comics several years ago.
The blending on the front can be improved a lot, try not to use multiple images of the same person. There are seemingly random images on the bottom that should be removed. I like the subtlety of the bat signal, so perhaps use a less prominent image with Batman blended across the bottom of the front instead a big image of his face. On the back the typography needs improvement; use a simpler font for the summary - the reddish hue grates on the eyes after a while - and shorten the length. Then put the tagline on top, and with the additional room on the below the summary that will be made, put the quote there. The arrangement of the back is cool, only ruined by the synopsis. The screens could be more creative (interesting border?), but they look fine. Try editing some screen to fit Knightfall more. I think if you implement these suggestions it'll look a lot better. Good effort. :)
i think this could be a pretty cool sequal to the dark knight :)
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Lots of spelling errors on the back, and I dont really understand the concept.
EDIT: Ok...
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#2, based on a book :)
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@2, Batman: Knightfall was an event that happened in the Batman comics several years ago.
The blending on the front can be improved a lot, try not to use multiple images of the same person. There are seemingly random images on the bottom that should be removed. I like the subtlety of the bat signal, so perhaps use a less prominent image with Batman blended across the bottom of the front instead a big image of his face. On the back the typography needs improvement; use a simpler font for the summary - the reddish hue grates on the eyes after a while - and shorten the length. Then put the tagline on top, and with the additional room on the below the summary that will be made, put the quote there. The arrangement of the back is cool, only ruined by the synopsis. The screens could be more creative (interesting border?), but they look fine. Try editing some screen to fit Knightfall more. I think if you implement these suggestions it'll look a lot better. Good effort. :)
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whats up witht the Luchador
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#5, His name is Bane
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no more comment?....
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Where do I get the font on the back?
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Could use some work in spelling, but other than that, awesome.
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