#3, Well, if it's your first, its not bad. Some things to keep in mind:
First off, what program do you edit in. Doesn't exactly look like MS Paint, but who knows. Second off, you don't need the Nintendo seal on the front of the box, you can shift over the SEGA logo to that position. If I'm not mistaken, that's a PAL movie rating you have on there, you should be using PEGI logos if my guess is right, if not, moving on...
And leastly, instead of having a random collage of characters for a background (it feels more like a comic book cover), try to incorporate the characters into a scene.
#17, #18
Please dont do that again! Bumping is bad enough but bumping AND double posting?!!! And you spelt "Check" wrong! Dont do it again or E_G will prob ban you, consider this a friendly, final warning.
Hi all Randoms out there, enjoy my work :)
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Looks like another random Sonic box...
No originality in the logo which looks really choppy, and the characters are just floating in a sea of...other characters.
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It was my first so il try to improve!
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#3, Well, if it's your first, its not bad. Some things to keep in mind:
First off, what program do you edit in. Doesn't exactly look like MS Paint, but who knows. Second off, you don't need the Nintendo seal on the front of the box, you can shift over the SEGA logo to that position. If I'm not mistaken, that's a PAL movie rating you have on there, you should be using PEGI logos if my guess is right, if not, moving on...
And leastly, instead of having a random collage of characters for a background (it feels more like a comic book cover), try to incorporate the characters into a scene.
Welcome, and I hope to see you improve!
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I use Adobe photo shop, and thanks,
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also on sonic riders it had that G rated sign so i just copied that :)
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#6, okay, that's fine, I don't know the ratings systems outside the U.S.
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Have u got any sonic work?
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#8, click on my name, I have several.
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good but... what tleeart said
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#6 Hey! An Australian!
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I can't see anything.
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#12, huh?
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#12, neiither can I.
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#14, As in this box? If not, try using Firefox, that's what I use.
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#11 I'm Australian.
BTW the box wont load.
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Chack out more of my work!
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Chack out more of my work!
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#17, #18
Please dont do that again! Bumping is bad enough but bumping AND double posting?!!! And you spelt "Check" wrong! Dont do it again or E_G will prob ban you, consider this a friendly, final warning.
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soz, my computer stuffed up!
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