Nobody seems to want to comment on this. Your glow on the front logo is too big in my opinion. Also, I think the font you used on the back doesn't work well. Look for something more gothic or classical, generally something less rounded. If you don't have a good font for it, try dafont www.dafont.com , it's a great font resource. Good luck in the competition.
you should have some resources on the golden army on this as it could easily be passed off as the original movie except the logo and sypnosis not a fan of the front or back IMO the front is just too plain ( i know thats what you were going for but this is too plain)
and the back just has no feeling. no creativity sorry...
Thank you so much for the feedback, you guys. Yea, 3#, there was more resorces but i didnt like how it looked with other stuff so i kept it simple. And #2 thanks for the site, its going to help out alot in the future.
Old Ron's Hellboy mug makes for a pretty dynamic and powerful front cover. I like it a lot. I agree with tleeart about the glow on the logo, I just think it needs to be toned down a bit. Good job buddy, and good luck!
Hey evryone, this is my box im entering in BOA's 2008 Movie Comp. I no its simple, but thats what i was going for. Credit to sentry for the temp.
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Nobody seems to want to comment on this. Your glow on the front logo is too big in my opinion. Also, I think the font you used on the back doesn't work well. Look for something more gothic or classical, generally something less rounded. If you don't have a good font for it, try dafont www.dafont.com , it's a great font resource. Good luck in the competition.
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you should have some resources on the golden army on this as it could easily be passed off as the original movie except the logo and sypnosis not a fan of the front or back IMO the front is just too plain ( i know thats what you were going for but this is too plain)
and the back just has no feeling. no creativity sorry...
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Thank you so much for the feedback, you guys. Yea, 3#, there was more resorces but i didnt like how it looked with other stuff so i kept it simple. And #2 thanks for the site, its going to help out alot in the future.
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I agree with everything tleeart said. Could you perhaps introduce some gold/ yellow on the front behind his head? that would look good.
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DANGIT! i was going to make a Hellboy 2 box for the comp too!
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hmmm...it's not great, but it's not too bad. :)
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Old Ron's Hellboy mug makes for a pretty dynamic and powerful front cover. I like it a lot. I agree with tleeart about the glow on the logo, I just think it needs to be toned down a bit. Good job buddy, and good luck!
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Hey, thanks Drakxxx :)
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It's an ok attempt. I don't like the back text. I feel it lacks overall.
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I think its looks pretty good. The glow around the front logo is abit too much, but apart from that I like it. Great job
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nice job, buddy!
My only suggestion is that you take the italicization off of the sypnosyis on the back.
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Thanks #12 :)
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