Both are good, the back in particular is outstanding. I think however they don't work as well together- they look separate.
I'm faving because I can see you have both worked hard on this- the effort shows.
No offense, but the front is horrible. I think if anyone should have uploaded this, it should have been YoshiStar because it's gonna get in the HoF for the back which you didn't even make.
#4, no offense taken. honestly, when the back is compared to the front, it just makes the front look plain ugly. but remeber, me and Yoshistar don't have a goal for this. We don't care if we get HoF, i don't care how much shit i get about the front becuase horrible compared to the back. We did this becuase we thought it would be fun, and it sure as hell was! *plus, this probably isn't gonna get HoF anyway because it's under my account.
#3, thank you, i did work hard on the front, it's just YoshiStar worked harder. But thank you for the support!
Good job for the both of you, but for me personally, it just isn't working as a collab. Would have been good individually, but still a pretty good effort.
Indeed. Impressive effort on both sides. I think a good way to make th front better is by moving the two pictures from Jak 1 & 3 to the top left and right hand corners respectively. The Jak in the center should be less faded and maybe the background changed to more of a map style.
thanks for the comments TTT and Rengoku, but i think that this was just a failed experiment. It was me and YoshiStar's first collab, and i think we'll learn from it.
Yeah, it was really fun to make! Never really worked with a greenish color scheme either OR a PS2 box so it felt super fresh. Tried my best to match the colors to the front, but looking at it again, maybe I should've made them a little darker ...
Afifan! What if after Christmas vacation or whenever you're free, we work on this a little more and try to make it better? I have a few ideas of what we can improve in the front and the back.
A collab between me and YoshiStar
YoshiStar : Back
Afifan000 : Front
I know the front is no where near as good as the back, but, I'm no where near as good as YoshiStar. We did the collab becuase it was fun to make!!
Enjoy!
This will probably be my last box for a couple of weeks, due to Christmas vacation in The Windy City.
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Love the back but the front needs more, but its really good!
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Both are good, the back in particular is outstanding. I think however they don't work as well together- they look separate.
I'm faving because I can see you have both worked hard on this- the effort shows.
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No offense, but the front is horrible. I think if anyone should have uploaded this, it should have been YoshiStar because it's gonna get in the HoF for the back which you didn't even make.
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#4, no offense taken. honestly, when the back is compared to the front, it just makes the front look plain ugly. but remeber, me and Yoshistar don't have a goal for this. We don't care if we get HoF, i don't care how much shit i get about the front becuase horrible compared to the back. We did this becuase we thought it would be fun, and it sure as hell was! *plus, this probably isn't gonna get HoF anyway because it's under my account.
#3, thank you, i did work hard on the front, it's just YoshiStar worked harder. But thank you for the support!
#2, thank you for the comment!
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This is great, I love the back. The front has a great design too. +fav
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Good design, and a good collaborative effort!
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thanks guys!
#7, thank you. hopefully our next collab will be better...
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Good job for the both of you, but for me personally, it just isn't working as a collab. Would have been good individually, but still a pretty good effort.
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#9, yea, kinda noticed that. too late now though!
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The two sides don't really flow very well, and neither one of them really suits the game.
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Indeed. Impressive effort on both sides. I think a good way to make th front better is by moving the two pictures from Jak 1 & 3 to the top left and right hand corners respectively. The Jak in the center should be less faded and maybe the background changed to more of a map style.
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thanks for the comments TTT and Rengoku, but i think that this was just a failed experiment. It was me and YoshiStar's first collab, and i think we'll learn from it.
MAIN REASON: don't got cs3 on me at chicago
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if i had a ps2 id buy this for sure! great box btw! :D
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Yeah, it was really fun to make! Never really worked with a greenish color scheme either OR a PS2 box so it felt super fresh. Tried my best to match the colors to the front, but looking at it again, maybe I should've made them a little darker ...
Afifan! What if after Christmas vacation or whenever you're free, we work on this a little more and try to make it better? I have a few ideas of what we can improve in the front and the back.
:)
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