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Wow! Nice first box!! The back is amazing. The black and gray colors really work well.

I have some suggestions to improve it, though!

1) The front is a bit awkward. Neku's positioning and the logo positioning is great! The gray lines aren't very nice looking though. I suggest taking those off and instead adding other characters which are tilted with the same angle and smaller so it looks like there's depth.

2) Love the back. The layout is really really cool. Man, you're great at positioning and placing things. Just wish the text in the gray strips were rotated to fit right in the middle of the strips. Right now, the bottom strip text is a bit low.

Man, you're gonna be awesome. TWEWY was my first box too. :D

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Personally I think the front looks a bit empty.
I quite like the back.(I recommend changing how you wrote the title in your presentation.
One of the best first's I have seen.

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#3, Hm, I think the front would be super classy and simple if he made the changes I suggested him to make.

But yeah, I agree, the TWEWY title you made does look kinda cool, but is a bit messy and hard to read. Plain White Arial Bold would look cool.

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I agree with the critiques, but woah!

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you are awesome

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Some extra effects is what this box needs. First of all, I recommend to use a (blurry) city background forthe front. And make a background for the back which suits the BG of the front!

#8: His suggestion is also good. I dunno, Optical is the one who's gonna make v2 in the end. q:

Nice first! ;)

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#2, I started writing my comment before yours was up lol.. Anyways i agree with you 100%.
#7, I'm thinking Yoshi's suggestion would look better.

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Nice job! I really like it. =)

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Very nice for a first.
Lovin' the back ^_^
+Fav
I look forward to more of your work.

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#11, I agree :D

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It's not bad at all for a first, but I think the front is a tad bland. Still, this is heaps better than my first. Very respectable art here, looking forward to seeing more.

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Koopa's made another alt? =P

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Wow. My first box into the HOF was for this game...I think it should be your first as well. Just a fantastic first box. I'm impressed.

+fav

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very creative and well done. If this is what your capable of, I'd love to see more of your designs!

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This is wonderful, a really great design and looks well thought out, very well executed. No real bad things I can say about it, I think you got this right :) Keep it up, I want to see more!

BTW, this so deserves a HOF.

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#18, If its an awesome box, it'll get get awesome attention! This box is amazing. There's just a couple of things bothering me, but they won't really make too much of a difference.

1) I like the panel-style on the front cover. It looks comicy and completely matches the style of the game. The only thing I'm not liking as much is the circular panel Neku is in. Its so .. circular and uncomicy. I think some sort of quadrilateral would work much better.

2) In your presentation the text is like, touching the box. If you moved it a little up, the whole thing would feel a little more spacious and neat.

3) On the back, I wish the 'Can you pull it off?' text was centered in the gray strip. Also, I think it'd be good to add a period at the end of the 'to change the world' text, because whenever I read it, it always looks like '7 Days. To change the world can you pull it off?', which doesn't have much of a flow and doesn't really make sense gramatically.

EDIT: Nice template, btw. Heheh. ;)

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First box in the HoF? I guess someone has made a alt account again! Just kidding, nice one. Keep them coming, Optical!

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Congrats for HoF! =D

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Congrats :)

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Congratulations on the HoF! And on your first box! That's quite the accomplishment.

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Cool.

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good job! +fav

high five!

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