Agreed with #5 This looks very clean. I'd like to see a little more going on with the front, and perhaps some screenshots on the back, but all in all this is a good job, and a decent improvement for you!
Damn you're getting good! The only problem I have is your spelling and grammar. There's far too many errors, and I know you're well capable of correcting them.
This IS your best! Its amazing, man. You pulled off the simplistic style well.
Change the text to this:
Eric Jones, after winning six medals for his bravery, came back from war ... only to find that his family had been killed by a gang lead by a Russian spy. Desperate for revenge, Eric searched long and impatiently and eventually found someone who he believed was the one who killed his family. Unfortunately, Eric killed the wrong man. Discovered by the police, he must flee ... but also hunt down the spy for PAYBACK.
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here's my new box cred there was nothing for this umm bred too SO
for the logo hope you enjoy
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Nice! Your best yet, just some grammar issues on the back, but I like the overall style!
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Thanks dam spelling
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thanks HCFB
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you're getting much better paper. keep it up. :)
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Thanks
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Agreed with #5 This looks very clean. I'd like to see a little more going on with the front, and perhaps some screenshots on the back, but all in all this is a good job, and a decent improvement for you!
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Damn you're getting good! The only problem I have is your spelling and grammar. There's far too many errors, and I know you're well capable of correcting them.
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#8, what words are spellet wrong
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this is your best.
maybe some screenshots on the guys waist on the back then it'll be great...
but yeah your improving.
+fav
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I swear I've heard of this game. There are loads of spelling errors but you can correct them. Maybe some screenshots somewhere?
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THANKS and thanks AT
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This IS your best! Its amazing, man. You pulled off the simplistic style well.
Change the text to this:
Eric Jones, after winning six medals for his bravery, came back from war ... only to find that his family had been killed by a gang lead by a Russian spy. Desperate for revenge, Eric searched long and impatiently and eventually found someone who he believed was the one who killed his family. Unfortunately, Eric killed the wrong man. Discovered by the police, he must flee ... but also hunt down the spy for PAYBACK.
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#13, Wow awesome Ok i will
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