kay, ill divide this in 2 parts, the good, and the bad.
the bad:
-its way too simple.
-The 3 girls are choppy
-no dev. or ESRB logos (esrb goes in the bottom left, dev goes in the bottom right)
-logo is too small and needs some more pizaz
-spine is stretched
-text is too big on the back
-the backk needs some screenshots and some characters too perhaps.
The good:
-the concept is great, it just needs some beefing up
-the back text is well written and there is no spelling errors.
-this beats most first boxes that others made.
word of advice: until you get better at fronts, NEVER make backs. trust me, I know.
I hope all that helped.
Do I even have to tell you what's wrong with this box? Before posting it here, post it in the Critiques forums.
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kay, ill divide this in 2 parts, the good, and the bad.
the bad:
-its way too simple.
-The 3 girls are choppy
-no dev. or ESRB logos (esrb goes in the bottom left, dev goes in the bottom right)
-logo is too small and needs some more pizaz
-spine is stretched
-text is too big on the back
-the backk needs some screenshots and some characters too perhaps.
The good:
-the concept is great, it just needs some beefing up
-the back text is well written and there is no spelling errors.
-this beats most first boxes that others made.
word of advice: until you get better at fronts, NEVER make backs. trust me, I know.
I hope all that helped.
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