So what I've noticed is that most peoples' boxes for this competition are just normal boxes that were desaturated to fit the rules. But mine, I decided, should be at least somewhat artistic. Rather than lots of grey and black, I thought, it should be white and black, and so this puppy was born. Credit to alldreamsfalldown for the template.
Great box, but I feel that the text on the back hurts my eyes. Though that may be the happenings with all of the boxes in this comp. Including mine. But really, good job!
Nice design. I like the high-contrast art. It makes the whole thing pop. It would have been cool to show a different colossus on the back, but whatever. I do agree that the typography on the back is a little small if this was going to be a box for store shelves, but as an art piece I think it's just fine.
The size of your character on the back on the horse is way off, he should be much smaller when compared to the colossus, especially when he's smaller on the front.
#10, I took it that the perspective of the composition places the viewer on the ground, close to the horse looking up at the colossus. From that angle the size differential seems correct to my eye. *shrug* I could be wrong.
So what I've noticed is that most peoples' boxes for this competition are just normal boxes that were desaturated to fit the rules. But mine, I decided, should be at least somewhat artistic. Rather than lots of grey and black, I thought, it should be white and black, and so this puppy was born. Credit to alldreamsfalldown for the template.
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great stuff, TTT.
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so...TwistedTinkerToy(awesome name) love it fav
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Great box, but I feel that the text on the back hurts my eyes. Though that may be the happenings with all of the boxes in this comp. Including mine. But really, good job!
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#4, *shrug*
Didn't hurt my eyes, and my eyes kind of suck. And thanks.
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very nice my friend.
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Very nice
So we had the same idea >_>
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good luck man
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Nice design. I like the high-contrast art. It makes the whole thing pop. It would have been cool to show a different colossus on the back, but whatever. I do agree that the typography on the back is a little small if this was going to be a box for store shelves, but as an art piece I think it's just fine.
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The size of your character on the back on the horse is way off, he should be much smaller when compared to the colossus, especially when he's smaller on the front.
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#10, I took it that the perspective of the composition places the viewer on the ground, close to the horse looking up at the colossus. From that angle the size differential seems correct to my eye. *shrug* I could be wrong.
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You make a great effort on this box. Congratulations, dude.
+FAV
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#11, This man speaks the truth.
The size is correct.
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#10, not to bump, but yeah, my intention was to make it look like you were close to Wander and his horse.
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