Here's my entry for the Boxartist's Choice competition, with credit to Techne for the template. Please view in full, as it looks much smaller than it actually is. The guy in the front is Glen Coffee. Roll tide, roll! Comment, criticize, and enjoy!
#6, People, comments like, "Not your best..." or "It's good, but not your best..." doesn't help. Stop and give a good comment.
Anyway, the box is alright, but here are a few things I noticed and didn't like: On the front, there should only be one image, not three. Just make it one. The background of the front is alright, but I would've prefered some less image and more standout effects, look at other 2K sports boxes.
As for the back: I don't like the text. I don't like how it's all different and just there. Make all the styles more similar and organize the placement better.
Right now: 2.7/5 Work on it, bro, and you'll get it!
Not bad, but it's impossible to read the back description, and the background on the front doesn't fully fit the template.
Not bad , 3.5/5 overall. I'll fav.
Lets see the front looks fairly good, I don't know what kind of feel you want to give off with this box, a more clean fell, or a grungy feel. If your wanting to imitate the official box try making it more grungy. AS for the back its a bit odd, it is also very hard to read the text, try a different font and color. Hope that helps.
It's not bad, but the back looks a bit rushed. The text is barely visible, and as far as an arrangement, it's a lot of renders, text and borders everywhere, The front is so simple, I think the back should follow suit. Tone it down a bit, and try and use white, or soft colors for the text.
Thanks for the criticism, everyone! It's really is appreciated. I just removed the description completely this time. This, however, will be the final update because HalfSwiss is probably getting tired of me sending him new versions of this box. Again, thanks for your support.
Not one of your best the back seems empty try to see if you can add some of the new features in somewhere and like #20 said flip Tim Tebow and shift every thing on the back.
Yup, the back feels really empty and the text is unappealing, and the football frames just don't look that good. The front is a bit too bland, and you should use some brushes of color on the enviroment behind the player to make it look "Ea Sports 10-er".
#22, You know, I never even thought of it, but yeah, the football frames are a tad off, and the random single box frame looks out of conjunction. Looks better without the description text though. You've simplified it, but the back still says "ACTION", where the front is not so animated.
Its good but i think the guy's arm on the front looks a bit weird, maybee a diffrent render? the back would looks much better with another font and without the glow :)
I like the cover a lot and back isn't bad, but I'm not so sure the font for "are you ready for some..." fits the mood of the box. I think you should stick with a heavy sans-serif like the NCAA FOOTBALL logo on the front and spine.
Here's my entry for the Boxartist's Choice competition, with credit to Techne for the template. Please view in full, as it looks much smaller than it actually is. The guy in the front is Glen Coffee. Roll tide, roll! Comment, criticize, and enjoy!
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Nice.
BUT MAKE A BACK.
Or you will get no fav.
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Nice but would have been better without the grayscaled background and players, and if Glen Coffee was larger fix that and it'll be great
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#2, okay. I will, I guess.
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Alright, I added a back. Watcha' think? Credit to Qwerty for the black screenborder.
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Not your best,
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#6, People, comments like, "Not your best..." or "It's good, but not your best..." doesn't help. Stop and give a good comment.
Anyway, the box is alright, but here are a few things I noticed and didn't like: On the front, there should only be one image, not three. Just make it one. The background of the front is alright, but I would've prefered some less image and more standout effects, look at other 2K sports boxes.
As for the back: I don't like the text. I don't like how it's all different and just there. Make all the styles more similar and organize the placement better.
Right now: 2.7/5 Work on it, bro, and you'll get it!
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Another update! This will be the final update today.
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Well, the back text doesn't fit the game. But, its a pretty good layout you got.
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The front is a lot better, but I can barely read the back text now.
3.4/5 Come on, you can do it.
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I like the front but I don't really like the back text or the screenborders, they don't fit the game very well. Fix that and it will look great.
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Not bad, but it's impossible to read the back description, and the background on the front doesn't fully fit the template.
Not bad , 3.5/5 overall. I'll fav.
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#7, Right that was not helpful.
Lets see the front looks fairly good, I don't know what kind of feel you want to give off with this box, a more clean fell, or a grungy feel. If your wanting to imitate the official box try making it more grungy. AS for the back its a bit odd, it is also very hard to read the text, try a different font and color. Hope that helps.
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Its not exactly engaging, in fact it looks a bit bland... Lack of colour really doesn't do this box justice...
But don't get me wrong. I couldn't do any better ;)
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It's not bad, but the back looks a bit rushed. The text is barely visible, and as far as an arrangement, it's a lot of renders, text and borders everywhere, The front is so simple, I think the back should follow suit. Tone it down a bit, and try and use white, or soft colors for the text.
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It's O.K I guess, but the tagline doesn't suit it.
3.5/5
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#15, Agreed
Ray blade said everything I think I would have.
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Thanks for the criticism, everyone! It's really is appreciated. I just removed the description completely this time. This, however, will be the final update because HalfSwiss is probably getting tired of me sending him new versions of this box. Again, thanks for your support.
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Not bad, back's a little empty though.
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Also Tim Tebow looks so stupid backwards.
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Not one of your best the back seems empty try to see if you can add some of the new features in somewhere and like #20 said flip Tim Tebow and shift every thing on the back.
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Yup, the back feels really empty and the text is unappealing, and the football frames just don't look that good. The front is a bit too bland, and you should use some brushes of color on the enviroment behind the player to make it look "Ea Sports 10-er".
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#22, You know, I never even thought of it, but yeah, the football frames are a tad off, and the random single box frame looks out of conjunction. Looks better without the description text though. You've simplified it, but the back still says "ACTION", where the front is not so animated.
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#23, Thanks for the critiques. I may do a remake of this later.
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Nice, It looks much better.The back could use more text some websites have short summaries for games, other than that its great.
+fav
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nice! fave
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its truly not your best but better than all of mine of my two accounts together so... fav
people check full size it looks great
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Its good but i think the guy's arm on the front looks a bit weird, maybee a diffrent render? the back would looks much better with another font and without the glow :)
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I like the cover a lot and back isn't bad, but I'm not so sure the font for "are you ready for some..." fits the mood of the box. I think you should stick with a heavy sans-serif like the NCAA FOOTBALL logo on the front and spine.
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