In reply to the unparallel parts i actually did that on purpose. Because as you go down the cover it gets crooked to show the crooked world. :P. I know, I'm so deep, and that's not whats he said.
#8, I understand if you want to do that, but the tilt should be more pronounced then. As it is now it appears sloppy rather than intended. Since you've created these very straight lines for your text to live in, the viewer's eye expects the text to follow the same plane. If you're going to mess with that expectation, that's okay, but you have to show that it's very deliberate by creating an invisible intersecting line that the text can follow and align all of your "crazy" text parallel to it. It's controlled chaos, but it's good design.
I know its like 1 AM here, I don't give a $%&#. Enjoy anyway. Also, listen to the band Too Late The Hero, they the shit.
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Like what you did to the temp.
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I like the concept but the typography on the cover does not run parallel to the lines of color you've created. I find that pretty distracting.
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Gasp.
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Sweet
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I agree with GlowBlue, nice concept though
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In reply to the unparallel parts i actually did that on purpose. Because as you go down the cover it gets crooked to show the crooked world. :P. I know, I'm so deep, and that's not whats he said.
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Well, #8, that being said i still think it dosent look right
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#8, I understand if you want to do that, but the tilt should be more pronounced then. As it is now it appears sloppy rather than intended. Since you've created these very straight lines for your text to live in, the viewer's eye expects the text to follow the same plane. If you're going to mess with that expectation, that's okay, but you have to show that it's very deliberate by creating an invisible intersecting line that the text can follow and align all of your "crazy" text parallel to it. It's controlled chaos, but it's good design.
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#10 yeah i understand. I decided to change it up completely now, but I like it.
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Very nice and simplistic monochromatic look.
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