alright this is my second box but my first real one. i think his one is 100x better than the last one but please if anyone has any constructive criticism please comment.
-thanks :)
Here's some areas that need work, a lot of your cutting has left white outlines so you could do with the extra time on that. The layout isn't impressive, it's not fun to look at this back cover because the screenshots and text are placed on top of each other. It would help to modify your design and divide it out more.
#3, I wasn't trying to bump my box I was just asking for comments so I know what to do to make my boxes better.
I added white on the top text to balance it, I tried to delete all of the white however it does standout and it looks so much worst, I think the white actually helps, but only on that text. I also spaced the text from the screenshots as much as i could.
wow. nice but needs lots of work. I see you used my box XD. where did you find that Revolution 4 logo? If you show me I could give you a better render.
alright this is my second box but my first real one. i think his one is 100x better than the last one but please if anyone has any constructive criticism please comment.
-thanks :)
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does anyone have any comments
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#2, Try looking at the bumping rule.
Here's some areas that need work, a lot of your cutting has left white outlines so you could do with the extra time on that. The layout isn't impressive, it's not fun to look at this back cover because the screenshots and text are placed on top of each other. It would help to modify your design and divide it out more.
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#3, I wasn't trying to bump my box I was just asking for comments so I know what to do to make my boxes better.
I added white on the top text to balance it, I tried to delete all of the white however it does standout and it looks so much worst, I think the white actually helps, but only on that text. I also spaced the text from the screenshots as much as i could.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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very good for a second box indeed
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Thanks #5!
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*update* fix the side logo
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wow. nice but needs lots of work. I see you used my box XD. where did you find that Revolution 4 logo? If you show me I could give you a better render.
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hey cool box
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^thanks :)
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#2, were'd you get this game.... or is it fake
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