Even though Luigi and yoshi arent exactly floating because of their pose, their positioning looks a little random TBH. Also, you should have used the better SUPER MARIO WII logo from the resource section, as I told you in the WiP.
Oh My God... This is great, well at least the front, except the floating characters. It is great compared to your old boxes. But on the back have better text, and custom screenshots, fav anyway.
#18, Seriously are you going to.... eh. The rules are that you need to spell as correctly as possible.
As for the box, wow, I don;t see what all the hype is about. Its really not that good. The Luigi render is a bit blurry, but not much so you can get by with that, and oh, I like the new logo, But it just seems a but awkward the way things are on the front. As for the back well, the Mario render is a bit rough around the edges, and the text needs something I can;t put my finger on it. But you have improved alot since your first one, and you are getting much better, just need to work on your backs.
Yeah, your best yet, only problems is that there is only ball mario which is new. Still, great job... I still lol at ball amrio, so damn funny. You are turning out to be a really great boxartist.
I'm sorry but i don't really like this box. Reasons:
1) the back text is too plain.
2) like TMRD said Luigi and Yoshi seemed to have been placed randomly
3) the pipes on the front over half the box, and theres a hole row of them so it looks like you're trying to cover up a mistake, one or tow wouldve been good enough.
4) the tag line doesn't really stand out much.
Good points:
1) I like the screen shots
2) the mario with the shell render is quite good
3) and the bowser render is quite good also
This box needs a lot of work. But i can see the effort put into it. Well done for that.
Yes, I'm finally Rank 4
This is fun to make
And the backgrounds is from SpritersResources
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Even though Luigi and yoshi arent exactly floating because of their pose, their positioning looks a little random TBH. Also, you should have used the better SUPER MARIO WII logo from the resource section, as I told you in the WiP.
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#2, But I did change it
Go look again
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You didn't do it.
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#4, There's not A LOT difference
But I did
Put it in 2 windows and look again
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#5, Okay. What about Yoshi?
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And I'll FAV.
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#6, WHAT about it
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Well, I don't know. But, you need a better logo.
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#9, I'll try to change it
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I updated with better logo
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Oh My God... This is great, well at least the front, except the floating characters. It is great compared to your old boxes. But on the back have better text, and custom screenshots, fav anyway.
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#12, Who's floating
Yoshi's falling down
Luigi's jumping
And Mario's flying
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best box yet +FAV +AUTHER FAV
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#14, wow auther fav
thank you
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This is good!!! 5/5
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#14, Its author!
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#17, dont comment on my spellin comment on THE BOX THE BOX MAN
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#18, Seriously are you going to.... eh. The rules are that you need to spell as correctly as possible.
As for the box, wow, I don;t see what all the hype is about. Its really not that good. The Luigi render is a bit blurry, but not much so you can get by with that, and oh, I like the new logo, But it just seems a but awkward the way things are on the front. As for the back well, the Mario render is a bit rough around the edges, and the text needs something I can;t put my finger on it. But you have improved alot since your first one, and you are getting much better, just need to work on your backs.
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#19, Listen, Yoshi is falling down, Luigi is jumping and Mario is flying, okay?!
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#20, The point is that It is very hard to tell that.
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This actually looks really good!
I lol'd at Ball Mario. =P
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#13, It looks like they're floating though...
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#13, It looks like they're floating though...
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Thanks for the FAVs and comments
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Yeah, your best yet, only problems is that there is only ball mario which is new. Still, great job... I still lol at ball amrio, so damn funny. You are turning out to be a really great boxartist.
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i do like that front, but the back is mediocre
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#26, What new power-ups do you think I should make
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Hey, do you think you could PM me that Bowser in the Clown Car Render?
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#29, Yeah sure
I think I kept it *go check*
yep I kept it
I'll PM you
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#29, How's my box, TML?
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#30, Would you mind sending it to me too? :)
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I'm sorry but i don't really like this box. Reasons:
1) the back text is too plain.
2) like TMRD said Luigi and Yoshi seemed to have been placed randomly
3) the pipes on the front over half the box, and theres a hole row of them so it looks like you're trying to cover up a mistake, one or tow wouldve been good enough.
4) the tag line doesn't really stand out much.
Good points:
1) I like the screen shots
2) the mario with the shell render is quite good
3) and the bowser render is quite good also
This box needs a lot of work. But i can see the effort put into it. Well done for that.
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Its your best box so far. I like the front, but the back... its okay, could use some work though
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#28, I dont know, something original like ball Mario like say shield mario or shell mario? great box.
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#32, Sure, check your PM
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#19, your really good at saying long bad things about stuff regaler peaple can't see.but good (really)box,i fav.
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