Im not liking it. Like, any of it. For starters, I don't think it was very nice of you to take his template without asking. Maybe he wanted to keep his temp to himself, and not have others access it?
Anyway, The front logo looks extremely out of place, Mario and luigi are unrealistically bright im comparison to their surroundings too. As their feet are overlapping the ground, it does not look right, if you know what I mean. Also, the characters behind them seem like more of a space-filler than something that benefits the actual design.
As for the back, there is not enough info and the text is slightly too big. The rest of the back just seems messy, especially on the right hand side. It feels as if you tried to copy the back of koopa's box, with a different background. I dont like how the clown flying thingy is the same image for both bowser and jr., and its too crowded. Also, it might just be me, but I think that mario and luigi being tilted looks strange.
One thing I do like though is that tagline. How did you do that?
#7 Just write your text in White. Alpha to Selection (or Select pixals in PS) then increase the size of the selection. (Select>Grow) Then fill in the selction on a different layer, then move it around :P
#7, I ddid PM her (wait is it a him ir a her now) first but they have yet to get online if she doesn't want me to use it then I'll change it.
As for the front, I'm alright with most of that just not M&L's shoes I could try to fix that again, I was basically aiming for a end-of-a-play-like scene. I wasn't really trying cop
The back, I'll be sure to change the desp. I wasn't really trying copy his box it just turned out that way, and I don't see how using the flying thing twice is so bad but I'll change that too. Mario and Luigi look alrite to me but if other complain then I'll edit it a bit.
And the tagline quite simple just add a border around the text the a drop shadow with no transparency (although anti-liaised)
#8 I tried to make it um, un-generic and making like the back would actually make it so.
And thank you everyone else At least every one can agree about the tagline. :P
its... its beautiful ideas nice logos beautiful nice renders backs really good i like the flag part of it but my favorite part of it is the back of the front 5/5 9/10 +fav
New box, Temp ripped off of Pixelfox, she's been offline for a while so I helped myself to it xD.
Hope you all enjoy. :)
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Nice
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awesome game (if existed) awesome box review:awesome
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Looks great! 8/10!
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I so glad you finally post it
+fav
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i'm faving for the sheer perfection that is that back.
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Im not liking it. Like, any of it. For starters, I don't think it was very nice of you to take his template without asking. Maybe he wanted to keep his temp to himself, and not have others access it?
Anyway, The front logo looks extremely out of place, Mario and luigi are unrealistically bright im comparison to their surroundings too. As their feet are overlapping the ground, it does not look right, if you know what I mean. Also, the characters behind them seem like more of a space-filler than something that benefits the actual design.
As for the back, there is not enough info and the text is slightly too big. The rest of the back just seems messy, especially on the right hand side. It feels as if you tried to copy the back of koopa's box, with a different background. I dont like how the clown flying thingy is the same image for both bowser and jr., and its too crowded. Also, it might just be me, but I think that mario and luigi being tilted looks strange.
One thing I do like though is that tagline. How did you do that?
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#7, Agreed.
The back is pretty cool but the front seems to dark and empty. Try and make the front more like the back and you will have a nice box =]
Love the tag line lol
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#7 Just write your text in White. Alpha to Selection (or Select pixals in PS) then increase the size of the selection. (Select>Grow) Then fill in the selction on a different layer, then move it around :P
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#7, I ddid PM her (wait is it a him ir a her now) first but they have yet to get online if she doesn't want me to use it then I'll change it.
As for the front, I'm alright with most of that just not M&L's shoes I could try to fix that again, I was basically aiming for a end-of-a-play-like scene. I wasn't really trying cop
The back, I'll be sure to change the desp. I wasn't really trying copy his box it just turned out that way, and I don't see how using the flying thing twice is so bad but I'll change that too. Mario and Luigi look alrite to me but if other complain then I'll edit it a bit.
And the tagline quite simple just add a border around the text the a drop shadow with no transparency (although anti-liaised)
#8 I tried to make it um, un-generic and making like the back would actually make it so.
And thank you everyone else At least every one can agree about the tagline. :P
Also what can add to the front.
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The front=great
The back=okay
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Putting it on an N64 totally defeats the purpose of "new".
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#12, No since super mario bros was on NES/SNES.
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Okay good point, but isn't the N64 kind of old though....
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But it is a good box.
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its... its beautiful ideas nice logos beautiful nice renders backs really good i like the flag part of it but my favorite part of it is the back of the front 5/5 9/10 +fav
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Damn this is great. The front is alright, but the back rules!!
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Awesome, 5/5, but NSMB came way after the N64 had bit the dust. Maybe a name like Super Mario Bros. 64 would be more appropriate?
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Great cover! Fave :)
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