1. The M Rating logo needs more info.
2. The blue guy behind your group on the back is way to big. Scale him down.
3. The main spartan on the front looks out of place with his huge size and all. You need to make him look "separate" from the rest of the image.
4. Maybe it is me, but the front cover just isn't working. For one thing, the planet's color pallet clashes with the rest of the front cover. What I would do is to make sure the entire affair uses the same color theme and pallet. This will bring a more uniform and professional look to the box.
5. The fade between the two backgrounds on the front cover do not overlay and mesh properly.
#2, Alright but
2. That is one of the main characters, the captain of the Noble six
3. I might just use a different render since It's hard to separate him
My Halo Reach box, hope you enjoy!
That is all.
Ha almost forgot my 30th box.
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Not bad. A handful of things stand out.
1. The M Rating logo needs more info.
2. The blue guy behind your group on the back is way to big. Scale him down.
3. The main spartan on the front looks out of place with his huge size and all. You need to make him look "separate" from the rest of the image.
4. Maybe it is me, but the front cover just isn't working. For one thing, the planet's color pallet clashes with the rest of the front cover. What I would do is to make sure the entire affair uses the same color theme and pallet. This will bring a more uniform and professional look to the box.
5. The fade between the two backgrounds on the front cover do not overlay and mesh properly.
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#2, Alright but
2. That is one of the main characters, the captain of the Noble six
3. I might just use a different render since It's hard to separate him
1,4,5, I'm working on them.
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Update,
change front render, edited planet, and blending of the backgrounds.
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Looks good, I would make the guy on the front alittle bigger and the colors on the front are alittle too gray for my taste, but it works.
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#5, I kinda can't it's at it's original size.
EDIT: I had update since I just noticed I uploaded the wring file.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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