This is cringe-inducingly bad. It's just the Japanese logo on a blurry NDS temp with a poorly cut out gen 5 pokemon on a bland and boring background.
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#2, Seriously?
This isn't great, but I can help you make it better.
Firstly, try to get a better quality version of the pokemon. You might find one on serebii.com
Secondly, as it is an Australian/American DS template, it would be a good idea to use an english logo. There is no OFFICIAL logo, I know, but if you look in the Pokemon Black & White thread in the "off topic" section of the forums, several people have made custom logos you can use, all you need to do is credit them.
The background is a bit bland too, you could try filling it up a bit more. Perhaps more gen 5 pokemon? Maybe the trainers? Its up to you.
I apologise that you were so rudely talked to duhmilkman1993, and if you ever need help for your boxarts, feel free to PM me.
ok naw, #2 this design is really not so bad. obviously he's no photoshop pro. needs to smooth the edges of the pokemon;shouldnt be able to see thru the logo; the checkered background should be a fading gradient. I actually like your subtle bg. the real box has one just like it, that dude got paid.
but i think overall its an original concept that (loosely) adheres to the principles of design. Which is more than can be said for the over submissions under this title.
also props for using an orthographic view of the box. y the hell are people using 3d. ur showing off 2d box art. just show it straight on.
After making a Pokemon Black cover, I only thought it was appropiate to make Pokemon White to go with it.
I stuck with the same template as my Black Version too
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This is cringe-inducingly bad. It's just the Japanese logo on a blurry NDS temp with a poorly cut out gen 5 pokemon on a bland and boring background.
0.0001/5.
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#2, Yeah I just looked at your box arts, and to be honest you can't really talk .... we're just both as bad I'm afraid .....
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#2, Seriously?
This isn't great, but I can help you make it better.
Firstly, try to get a better quality version of the pokemon. You might find one on serebii.com
Secondly, as it is an Australian/American DS template, it would be a good idea to use an english logo. There is no OFFICIAL logo, I know, but if you look in the Pokemon Black & White thread in the "off topic" section of the forums, several people have made custom logos you can use, all you need to do is credit them.
The background is a bit bland too, you could try filling it up a bit more. Perhaps more gen 5 pokemon? Maybe the trainers? Its up to you.
I apologise that you were so rudely talked to duhmilkman1993, and if you ever need help for your boxarts, feel free to PM me.
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#2, This is why new users leave. Listen to TMRD his got the right idea.
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ok naw, #2 this design is really not so bad. obviously he's no photoshop pro. needs to smooth the edges of the pokemon;shouldnt be able to see thru the logo; the checkered background should be a fading gradient. I actually like your subtle bg. the real box has one just like it, that dude got paid.
but i think overall its an original concept that (loosely) adheres to the principles of design. Which is more than can be said for the over submissions under this title.
also props for using an orthographic view of the box. y the hell are people using 3d. ur showing off 2d box art. just show it straight on.
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