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Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Box Cover Comments
Comment on Jankip's Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows Box Art / Cover.
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Credit to Lestat_the_Vampire for the movie logo
Pan for the template
This is my take on Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows(Both parts!!)
Note, the back took forever. Vaderkid, if you're going to give more criticism than constructive comments, go away.
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I'm not feeling this one for several reasons:
1) Harry doesn't appear in his Hogwarts uniform in the book.
2) Characters on the front aren't blended correctly.
3) The "Full-Screen Edition" banner is all choppy.
4) It seems as though the template isn't matched with the bg.
5) No ratings on the front.
6) No actors names, director or crew listed on the back.
7) Logo's appear choppy.
8) The deathly hallow symbol isn't right.
How to fix these.
1) Find a wallpaper with all 3 main characters on it, then blend it into the background and sharpen the image.
2) If you wish to blend the characters then blend from the bottom, that way they lose the cutline.
3) Use a box to create the banner.
4) Start out with a 800x1150 front and back (Seperately) and a 120x1150 spine, then transform the image to fit under the template.
5) Add in BBFC and DVD logo's on the front.
6) Use the font "Steeltongs" which you can find at dafont.com for creating the credit list on the back.
7) Clean the logo's up, on dafont there is a Harry Potter font, use that to create the logo if the actual one isn't available.
8) If you can't create the full symbol then create half of it and duplicate the layer, flip it and you'll have your symbol.
If you need any help message me and I'll see what I can do.
Hope that helps for the future.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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ESRB isn't on the movie, and ratings arent on the front.
Why would I write all the actors when I don't even know all?
Well, If I can even find another Harry Potter image without his robes.
And I did use the HarryP font, also the Lumos font.
And the hallows symbol IS a triangle with a circle in it.
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#3, Sorry, BBFC.
Go to IMDb and pick Daniel Radcliffe, Emma Watson, Rupert Grint, Alan Rickman, Jason Isaacs, Tom Felton, and so on.
The Hallows symbol is choppy.
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Okay, thanks! I'll check it out!
And the only logos ever seen in the front(well at least for me) Is the movie logo.
EDIT: It's turning out great, be back tomorrow!
Edited at 1 decade ago
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Updated!
-Added the actor text
That's it! I will try to find a Harry render, does anybody have one? I'm bad at rendering. Can someone render this Harry for me link ?
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EDIT: If that one doesn't work, try this: link
Edited at 1 decade ago
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link
Try it, please.
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#8, I tried but I couldn't download it, IMDB has a lock on downloading files.
Find another and send it to me in PM and I'll render it for you.
I like that you've added in the actors names and crew, Maybe make it white and drop a shadow on it?
Edited at 1 decade ago
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Okay, sure. Oh, and Leegion, do you think I've improved since my first box?
EDIT: Found image:
link
Also, my PM messages aren't working. I PMed Reed when my 1st box was made, but he never replied.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#10, Just incase you didn't recieve it.
[IMG]http://i34.tinypic.com/2d93abp.png[/IMG]
And yes I think you have improved, I can probably help you out with the entire box itself, if you need any help then message me, I also found these:
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If you are gonna use 3d templates I would suggest first getting a blank flat dvd template then skewing it to fit the 3d template. You can tell you just put the text and pics and then skewed them.
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better than your others, if your using photoshop use the mask and gradeint tool of the folk in the background
this should help link
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Update!
Added New Harry Potter render, thanks Leegion! You are awesome! Are you feeling it a bit more?
Edited at 1 decade ago
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This is terrible.
Lots of emptiness, cut off renders, crappy glows,poor 3-D, poor text, Terrible borders and no age rating.
0/10.
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#15, I was gonna say that, but then I'd have about 15 butthurt users breathing down my neck. But yeah, this isn't good. Its empty, the background for the box is the background for the entire image, and most of the renders just cut off randomly.
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#15, there is age rating! Check the back, will you? This isn't a five-minute made crap box, took me a few hours!
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#17, A few hours that were wasted apparently.
Read some tutorials and try again.
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Vaderkid: Stop spamming my boxes with stupid crap, freak you.
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#19, Freak me? No good sir, FREAK YOU!
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#19, Not spamming. Being Truthful...
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If this isn't good, nothing is!
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Compare this:
link
to your box.
It called constructive criticism.
Use wips and improve.
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Jeez, It's not my millionth box.
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#24, That's why I said improve.
I'm not going to start a spam war but just learn to know you box isn't very good.
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IT'S MY FOURTH. THAT'S HIS TWENTY-NINTH.
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#26, I know but you said nothing was good. Look your missing the point.
It isn't good.Fix what I said. Use the wips, people will help you, you get good like Yoshi Star.
/end.
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Seriously. I'm making a new box, with a different program. No need to say( :P ), but I don't think this will need WIP. Oh, and the program is better than Photoshop.
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#30, When I first started, I barely got any attention. Even now, I still don't get too much. You have to keep trying, and get better. The people are floating, the background is generic and somewhat boring. There is no reason to have the people opaque. You made the Deathly Hallow symbol in paint and it is very messy. The borders don't match. The 3d is done poorly. Not much presentation. Overall, it is not all that great. It still needs a WiP thread, for this is not the best box, by any means whatsoever.
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I made it in Photoshop. Paint can't render anything.
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552 views is a lot. I already gave you things to work on, and you obviously are not putting in the effort to listen to critique.
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If you want more feedback, then update with improvements.
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Jankip-"Please, help! Barely anybody's viewing this! I wanna give up!"
well if yur gonna hav that kind of attitude their is no reason of you being on this site. honestly stop being a baby. when i started i got very little out of this site as well. just take some time off a try to learn to make better boxes. Honestly if it doesn't look very good, no matter if its your 4th box or your 29th box, dont post it! keep on working until you know it is the best. ok.
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#3, the hallows sign has a line in the middle for the elder wand...
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uh where do you make boxarts?
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