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Paper Mario box art cover
By avatar jojo999 1 on August 29th, 2010
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jojo999 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

got pics from google template from Oblivion and hope you like it

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Sir Pringles 26 [ 1 decade ago ]

Seeing that this is your first box, it is not horrible. Yet, you've got a long way to go. The front is okay, but the logo could be a tad less... spread out. As of right now, the logo is pretty much in three different places. Try to arrange it so that they are in the top or bottom. Of course that is just the norm, but this does not work. Also, maybe a picture of Paper Mario would have been accurate.
The back is missing a lot... Only very, very few boxes get away with a plain background like yours. This is not one of them. It looks as though you are missing a lot of the template, which I guess you do. Do not upload boxes with incomplete templates, unless it's somehow part of the box. A better game description would be in place, and the randomly placed renders does no good. Plus, you have three ESRB logos in the bottom. Why?
Overall, it's a genuine try for a first box, but it could improve.

By the way, try the forums before posting any boxes. IT's hard to get the help, but it really pays off!

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jojo999 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

thanks for the help

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a guy96 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

Not bad for first box.

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oxol 23 [ 9 years ago ]

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As for the box, I believe it would have worked better without the back.
The 3Dlogo is blurry, and you should, in my opinion, have used an official Mario Logo instead.
The Mario is looking good, did you paint him? Sure, he's looking good, but he doesn't fit the style of the rest of the box, really.

I don't know if you have left or are looking back now and then, but I hope you haven't abandoned us, you've got potencial.

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