#1, I highly disagree. Considering its directed by Stephen Speilberg and Michael Bay the chances of it being rated R are very VERY slim.
Anyway, I made this due to the game cheezy movie-esqu vibe to it. The posters before each map, the trailer for an intro, hell even certain moments in the game seemed like they were from a movie. Plus the credits tried to act like movie credits. So anyway. Yeah. Minimilistic effort I suppose.
This case has a lot of cussing on it...
I think it would be rated R as well. What zombie movie hasn't?
- I don't like the screen border. You can see where the picture's edges are.
- Front is extremely empty and boring.
- Too much back text.
#3, I refuse to accept that the back has too much text. A few sentences is NOT too much text. As for the front, meh sorta and the screen border well, I cant see the corners, but then again I'm color blind so that may just be me.
As for the cussing, that was purposely done as I felt that the vibe of Left 4 Dead 2 called for minor cussing such as 'Bitch' and 'Shit'
Also, again, Michael Bay and Steven Speilberg I don't think have evr made a rated R movie ever, so again, I believe that they could easily make this a PG-13 movie.
Holy shit dude. We critique you to help you for your future projects, not to piss you off. If you don't like the critique just don't comment on it, let it be.
On to the box, I agree with Daemon. There needs to be more pics imo, just one picture looks weird. The front is pretty good but it feels like there needs to be more on the top of it, maybe centering the people, but idk how that would turn out.
Many things need work here. I'm going to give you some critique now, don't go losing your mind over it.
- Having everything slanted as well as pushed off to the left side looks awkward, and doesn't work out as an attractive design. Because of that, there's a ton of empty space in the right and upper sections of the front, making it unbalanced.
- The "featuring" text at the top looks tacky and unnecessary. Movie posters/cover artwork will simply put the actors/actresses names. The feature just takes up space.
- The text underneath the logo should be better placed. Right now it's position and size would make most people think the name of the movie is "Left 4 Dead 2: This Time, it All Goes South"
- The first thing I notice when I look at the back is the drastic change in color. From the front to back, we go from dark yellow to bright green. There needs to be at least some consistency.
- The screenshot is randomly placed, and you could do with more than one. The bright red splatter-border is out of place as well, mainly due to how bright it looks against the green. In addition, fading out the edges of the screenshot would help seeing that the border doesn't completely cover it.
- Any professionally made cover isn't going to have a bunch of swearing on it. Of course this doesn't have to be exactly like a professionally made cover, but it still bothers me.
#23, If it's got too much text in his opinion, he has every right to say it. Critique doesn't have to be 100+ characters. I'm probably wasting my time telling you this, but it pisses me off to no end to see someone reject perfectly good critiques without giving a valid reason for why you don't need to listen to it.
#25, Looking back, you have given a few reasons, but you still seem like a pretty big asshole to me. It seems like you are constantly trying to defend your boxes rather than listen to advice being given. From what I have seen, it doesn't look like you've made a WIP for this box either. If you had made a thread and had an open mind to critiques, this box could have been improved quite a bit before posting.
#26, I do have an open mind to critique, just not retarded critique like "Too much text" When theres only 2 or 3 sentences. I mean thats like going to a McDonalds and saying "Too much healthy food" When they have like 4 or 5 healthy options on the menu compared to like the 20 or so burgers they have.
#27, I actually think it's too much text as well though, so it's not really retarded. The front is rather simplistic, and I think the back would look better with no or very little text. Or at least you could make the text smaller. Still, that's mine and Daemon's critique, and just because you don't agree with it, that doesn't make it retarded.
Ugh... did we not go through this a while ago? Vaderkid, for Christs sakes, learn how to take critique, and if you really think that your boxes are perfect and don't need improvement, you are arrogant beyond help, critique does not need to be a wall of text, critique is to bluntly point out flaws.
#29, Wow, you know what, I'm done with this shit. I disagree with one persons critique and I have the whole sit breathing down my neck. Its an opinion people, get the fuck used to it.
#34, Really?. I dont even think you are a adult, you certainly dont act like one. I agree with #35 your Ignorance Is really pathetic, you should just stop while you think you are ahead.
#32, You still refuse to accept that every response towards a critique you have given has always been hostile to the critic. You truly are one of the most thick and ignorant jackasses I have ever seen on this planet, just leave the site, I'd rather have no new competant members at all then have 11 year olds like you thinking thier work is better than everyone else.
It is pretty good but I think it should be rated R
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#1, I highly disagree. Considering its directed by Stephen Speilberg and Michael Bay the chances of it being rated R are very VERY slim.
Anyway, I made this due to the game cheezy movie-esqu vibe to it. The posters before each map, the trailer for an intro, hell even certain moments in the game seemed like they were from a movie. Plus the credits tried to act like movie credits. So anyway. Yeah. Minimilistic effort I suppose.
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This case has a lot of cussing on it...
I think it would be rated R as well. What zombie movie hasn't?
- I don't like the screen border. You can see where the picture's edges are.
- Front is extremely empty and boring.
- Too much back text.
5/10 Not your best. :(
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#3, I refuse to accept that the back has too much text. A few sentences is NOT too much text. As for the front, meh sorta and the screen border well, I cant see the corners, but then again I'm color blind so that may just be me.
As for the cussing, that was purposely done as I felt that the vibe of Left 4 Dead 2 called for minor cussing such as 'Bitch' and 'Shit'
Also, again, Michael Bay and Steven Speilberg I don't think have evr made a rated R movie ever, so again, I believe that they could easily make this a PG-13 movie.
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#4, Fine, don't take advice.
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Winfull winning is win.
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#5, Fine, be a bitch about the fact that some of your critique is completely retarded.
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Sorry for the double post, VGboxarts being gay abotu me editing my post
#6 Thanks
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#7, Someone sounds like a little kid right now.....
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#9, Coming from the guy who put 2 ellipses at the end of his sentence.
Do you realize how bad that looks when you're trying to make a point.
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#10, I really dont care, thats the thing.
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#11, Oh but you do. You get mad about the way other people type then you do the same thing. Its called hypocricy.
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#12, Hmmm how is it hypocrisy? Last time I checked, not caring and getting mad are two different feelings. I think your looking for a reason to fight.
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#13, But if you get mad about something then you care about it. So you don't care about your own typing but you care about others. Thus hypocricy.
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#14 Oh well, so be it. I still could care less.
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#15, My point still stands.
Moving on.
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#16, God! Leave him alone!
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Holy shit dude. We critique you to help you for your future projects, not to piss you off. If you don't like the critique just don't comment on it, let it be.
On to the box, I agree with Daemon. There needs to be more pics imo, just one picture looks weird. The front is pretty good but it feels like there needs to be more on the top of it, maybe centering the people, but idk how that would turn out.
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One of your better projects, the execution is just impeccable on this one, well done.
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The screens off-balances it, you need more, please learn how to take critique, if you wish to want your works improve.
PS: It's "Through"
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Many things need work here. I'm going to give you some critique now, don't go losing your mind over it.
- Having everything slanted as well as pushed off to the left side looks awkward, and doesn't work out as an attractive design. Because of that, there's a ton of empty space in the right and upper sections of the front, making it unbalanced.
- The "featuring" text at the top looks tacky and unnecessary. Movie posters/cover artwork will simply put the actors/actresses names. The feature just takes up space.
- The text underneath the logo should be better placed. Right now it's position and size would make most people think the name of the movie is "Left 4 Dead 2: This Time, it All Goes South"
- The first thing I notice when I look at the back is the drastic change in color. From the front to back, we go from dark yellow to bright green. There needs to be at least some consistency.
- The screenshot is randomly placed, and you could do with more than one. The bright red splatter-border is out of place as well, mainly due to how bright it looks against the green. In addition, fading out the edges of the screenshot would help seeing that the border doesn't completely cover it.
- Any professionally made cover isn't going to have a bunch of swearing on it. Of course this doesn't have to be exactly like a professionally made cover, but it still bothers me.
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i likes this!
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#21, See, I'm not gonna get mad about this because ot seems like fairly rasonable critique as opposed to "Too much text"
My only disagreement with your post is that, as I previously mentioned, I am color blind and to me the abck and the front both look the same color.
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#23, If it's got too much text in his opinion, he has every right to say it. Critique doesn't have to be 100+ characters. I'm probably wasting my time telling you this, but it pisses me off to no end to see someone reject perfectly good critiques without giving a valid reason for why you don't need to listen to it.
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#24, Besides all the reasons I said, Right?
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#25, Looking back, you have given a few reasons, but you still seem like a pretty big asshole to me. It seems like you are constantly trying to defend your boxes rather than listen to advice being given. From what I have seen, it doesn't look like you've made a WIP for this box either. If you had made a thread and had an open mind to critiques, this box could have been improved quite a bit before posting.
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#26, I do have an open mind to critique, just not retarded critique like "Too much text" When theres only 2 or 3 sentences. I mean thats like going to a McDonalds and saying "Too much healthy food" When they have like 4 or 5 healthy options on the menu compared to like the 20 or so burgers they have.
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#27, I actually think it's too much text as well though, so it's not really retarded. The front is rather simplistic, and I think the back would look better with no or very little text. Or at least you could make the text smaller. Still, that's mine and Daemon's critique, and just because you don't agree with it, that doesn't make it retarded.
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Ugh... did we not go through this a while ago? Vaderkid, for Christs sakes, learn how to take critique, and if you really think that your boxes are perfect and don't need improvement, you are arrogant beyond help, critique does not need to be a wall of text, critique is to bluntly point out flaws.
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#29, Wow, you know what, I'm done with this shit. I disagree with one persons critique and I have the whole sit breathing down my neck. Its an opinion people, get the fuck used to it.
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#30, Have you seen all of your comments on your art? Not even once you consider critique, instead you defend your box like we're hostile.
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#31, Yeah because agreeing with every single piece of critique on this box except for one is defending it? Right?
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#32, God, kid give it a rest.
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#33, Quite, the grown ups are talking.
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Your ignorance is pathetic, Vaderkid.
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#34, Really?. I dont even think you are a adult, you certainly dont act like one. I agree with #35 your Ignorance Is really pathetic, you should just stop while you think you are ahead.
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Why is it that every time Vaderkid posts a box, there's always 30+ comments of just bickering?
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#37, Because people would rather comment about a single one of my comments then say a single thing about the box.
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#38, Facepalm.
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#39, Yeah because stateing a fact is facepalm worthy, right?
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#40, Yes it is.
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#40 in this case yes it is hahaha
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#32, You still refuse to accept that every response towards a critique you have given has always been hostile to the critic. You truly are one of the most thick and ignorant jackasses I have ever seen on this planet, just leave the site, I'd rather have no new competant members at all then have 11 year olds like you thinking thier work is better than everyone else.
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