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Jak II box art cover
By avatar Marky223 1 on October 5th, 2010
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Marky223 1 [ 9 years ago ]

My second box! This is like a V2 of my other box ''Jak ll'' But, because I don't know how to upload a V2 I posted a WHOLE other one. AND I FORGOT THE NAUGHTYDOG LOGO! :(

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MattStar 48 [ 9 years ago ]

I think it looks good, but you should work on something new. I also recommend making a back that reflects well from the front.

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tleeart 45 [ 9 years ago ]

There's an Update Box link at the bottom of your box's page.

There are so many things I'm not liking about this. First off, you have the render of Jak and Dark Jak in the middle there. The lightning effect that you have is cut off before you reach the top of your box. I also don't like that you run out of image on the bottom of that render and don't do enough to transition it well.

Also, the portraits of Jak on the bottom seem completely unnecessary, and just randomly placed because you ran out of your background image most likely. You would be better off creating your own scene from renders and blending it all together.

Finally, your use of those Jak portraits has made it impossible to see the text portion of the Sony Computer Entertainment logo. If you insist on keeping those portraits there, you should make that text white and give it a drop shadow for better visibility.

I don't know if you will listen to any of my concerns, but there you have it.

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Marky223 1 [ 9 years ago ]

#3, wow, I....uhhh, Thank you. I will listen and see what I can do. (I will probaly never make a back)
PS: I did ran of room at the bottom. And at the top too. (I replaced the top with sky)

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Marky223 1 [ 9 years ago ]

#3, wow, I....uhhh, Thank you. I will listen and see what I can do. (I will probaly never make a back)
PS: I did ran of room at the bottom. And at the top too. (I replaced the top with sky)

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Marky223 1 [ 9 years ago ]

Double post...

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Ferarro 2 [ 9 years ago ]

It looks like you took the bush tool and messed with the top of the sky. Also, those icon things at the bottom are unnecessary and don't fit very well.

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Marky223 1 [ 9 years ago ]

#7,
I did....STUPID PICTURE SHOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER

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