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Super Mario Galaxy DS box art cover
By avatar mariozeldafan 1 on January 21st, 2011
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mariozeldafan 1 [ 1 decade ago ]

Credit to YoshStar for the box template

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tmrd 43 [ 1 decade ago ]

I think this would look a lot better if you took out that bright blue background and took a space background from google images. Change the black text on the back to white so it is easier to read, and maybe make your tagline more fancy.
Although the stars on your screenshots are a very good idea, you might want to also put a plain coloured border around the screens just to give them a good lift. Also, you want to remember that all your screenshots should be the same size in designs like this, and the one on the right certainly doesnt match the other two.

Other than that, your main problem here is that instead of looking like a complete picture, your box is just looking like a whole pile of renders. You should try to always have your renders have a purpose, otherwise it looks like they are just spacefillers, which is never pretty.

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tmrd 43 [ 1 decade ago ]

Also, all your Lumas, the planet that is further away, the template and even the ESRB are very very choppy. You might want to fix that up.
Last but not least you should change the red nintendo logo to a white one so that it is easier to read and doesnt contrast as much.

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Todasengel12 8 [ 1 decade ago ]

Personally that Mario image is overused for my taste. Especially since there is nothing done to it to make it your own really

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