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Pokemon White Version box art cover
By avatar Jankip 10 on January 21st, 2011

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Jankip 10 [ 9 years ago ]

Alright, I made White version cause that's the one I'm getting.
First, I KNOW that some images are cut off. And credit to Manuel_Alejandro for the template. Logo by me(yeah, lame). I like everything but the logo and the spine.

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tmrd 43 [ 9 years ago ]

First, can I thank you and give you a hug for not slapping the legendary pokemon on a background and called it a box. You actually tried to be creative, and thats a very good thing.
There are some design flaws that I am going to point out. Just to help you improve :)
The first thing, everything is very very blurry. Thats what happens when you make an image bigger, which you never ever want to do. It is better to make an images surroundings smaller. In this case, that would be all the images and the template. You want to shrink the big images, not grow the small ones. I speak for the majority of VGBA when I say that we would rather a small image than a blurry one. In this case, every single one of your characters on the front and back, minus the three pokemon, have been grown and they are all blurry. But even more than that, your background is really blurry. You might want to find a new one.
Your back is actually also very well laid out. Once again however, your problem is making things look as good as you want them to. You should have kept the words "Pokemon is back" all in white with the crack thing rather than used the gradient. Instead of the little amount of text under the tagline, in a smaller font, have about 3 lines of information about the game, called a synopsis. You should also move the guy on the right over so its more symmetrical. Under that, there seems to be an overload of text. Cut out all the ones on the top-keep the stuff on the bottom. Finally, change the rainbow screen borders to a single colour one.

Although that may sound like a lot of changes, they are just my recommendations to make this box great. It has a lot of potential, it just hasnt harnessed and unleashed it yet. Follow these tips and you can. If you need help with any of it feel free to Private Message me through the forums.

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Jankip 10 [ 9 years ago ]

#2, Thanks! I'll start editing now(if I have time).

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Jankip 10 [ 9 years ago ]

Updated:
-Shrunk characters
-Changed bg on front
-Changed Screenie border
-Added more text on back
-Changed "POKEMON IS BACK" formatting
-Added Wi-Fi logo

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Jankip 10 [ 9 years ago ]

Ha!
3D is god. Credit to Ninty for the White template.

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JoeyTheHedgehog 36 [ 9 years ago ]

Nice, I like it.

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Jankip 10 [ 9 years ago ]

#6, thanks!

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MattStar 48 [ 9 years ago ]

I actually like this design a lot. Not your stereo-typical Pokemon case. You should use higher definition templates and logos though.

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Jankip 10 [ 9 years ago ]

thanks! And I will

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