#2 Nice critique, wanna just troll a little more to help? There's a reason it says "Constructive criticism is the rule!".
Well, this is okay for a first, but nothing to special. All it is is a swirly background with choppy renders, a logo, and a template slapped on. Try something a little more original. Use a different background, and find better renders from the resource section here or on the forums. As for the chip, it is just the same thing with a different background and a squashed logo. Stretch the logo vertical, and get a new background. Don't just use those smoke effects in your program. Nice first, I hope this helps you, and here's a fav to jump start you.
Good luck!
EDIT: Oh, it isn't your first... Well, try again then...
Credit to jevangod and nerdysimmer for the templates. I'll update this soon. Ver.1
Edited at 1 decade ago
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If it's not finished, don't upload it.
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#2 Nice critique, wanna just troll a little more to help? There's a reason it says "Constructive criticism is the rule!".
Well, this is okay for a first, but nothing to special. All it is is a swirly background with choppy renders, a logo, and a template slapped on. Try something a little more original. Use a different background, and find better renders from the resource section here or on the forums. As for the chip, it is just the same thing with a different background and a squashed logo. Stretch the logo vertical, and get a new background. Don't just use those smoke effects in your program. Nice first, I hope this helps you, and here's a fav to jump start you.
Good luck!
EDIT: Oh, it isn't your first... Well, try again then...
Edited at 1 decade ago
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