Here it is my newest box
I highly edited this link for the front
and credits to silentoblivion for the borders on the back
Please comment and fav also view in fullscreen
I get the front, but the fractal renders aren't my taste. The back, however, holds promise. The tagline "Earth goes dark" appears to go against the very notion of Transformers, though. Not the phrase itself, but the styling and placement. It's bland, and gives off the appearance of a placeholder.
I'd recommend researching some new font types, something more akin to the logo, perhaps, and place some more of your efforts into both a better tagline placement and a synopsis. Everything else is good as is.
Finally, do you have a 2D high-res version to share? Having the raw image to look over is always preferable when giving critiques.
Better, the 3D version looks nice, but when i go to look at the printable, the border looks VERY blurry, The way you moved the tagline is better. This box just needs a little bit more polish, and it could look great.
Here it is my newest box
I highly edited this link for the front
and credits to silentoblivion for the borders on the back
Please comment and fav also view in fullscreen
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It looks pretty awesome man!
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I get the front, but the fractal renders aren't my taste. The back, however, holds promise. The tagline "Earth goes dark" appears to go against the very notion of Transformers, though. Not the phrase itself, but the styling and placement. It's bland, and gives off the appearance of a placeholder.
I'd recommend researching some new font types, something more akin to the logo, perhaps, and place some more of your efforts into both a better tagline placement and a synopsis. Everything else is good as is.
Finally, do you have a 2D high-res version to share? Having the raw image to look over is always preferable when giving critiques.
Edited at 1 decade ago
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#3, thanks for the comment I added a printable and I will be updating it soon
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I like it but the placement of the tagline looks obnoxious.
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updated
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Better, the 3D version looks nice, but when i go to look at the printable, the border looks VERY blurry, The way you moved the tagline is better. This box just needs a little bit more polish, and it could look great.
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