For a first box this is a really nice job. It flows really well and it's crisp and clean. The composition and layout are also very well done.
However, I think the presentation could do with some work. The 3D doesn't quite look right. You could also add some shine/shadowing to give the box more of a 3D feel. Reflections also do wonders for presentation :P.
The front's a pretty neat extension of the official box, zooming out a bit and adding a touch of color. The blending is pretty decent, although the section to the immediate right of the soldier could use some brightening up - it is an explosion, after all. Don't take these critiques the wrong way, though, as this is still solid as a first submission.
Officially my first box on here!
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For a first box this is a really nice job. It flows really well and it's crisp and clean. The composition and layout are also very well done.
However, I think the presentation could do with some work. The 3D doesn't quite look right. You could also add some shine/shadowing to give the box more of a 3D feel. Reflections also do wonders for presentation :P.
Allow me to give you your first favourite.
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Awesome box, especially for a first!! I see a lot of potential in you!
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#2, Thanks for the feedback, I have taken some of your feedback and tried to improve the presentation, I hope it looks better now.
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#3, Thanks dude :)
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The front's a pretty neat extension of the official box, zooming out a bit and adding a touch of color. The blending is pretty decent, although the section to the immediate right of the soldier could use some brightening up - it is an explosion, after all. Don't take these critiques the wrong way, though, as this is still solid as a first submission.
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Really nice!
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Overall it looks pretty decent, just needs a few tweaks, namely the correct specs featured in the official cover. Excellent work nonetheless. :)
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Can these covers be printed for use on a game box?
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