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Alan Wake's American Nightmare box art cover
By avatar B O M 6 on April 24th, 2012
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This is my first box, open to any kind of constructive criticism however harsh it may be.

Approximate number of hours spent: 7-8 hours.

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amia 49 [ 7 years ago ]

Nice & good for 1st time ..........

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

Thank you very much.

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soniajabar 1 [ 7 years ago ]

printable please

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

Really? o:

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SimpleWig 42 [ 7 years ago ]

Yeah this is really good. Im impressed.

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

Thank you.

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ZombieDeadpool8 22 [ 7 years ago ]

The 3D template is a little off, but besides that this is a very good start. I look forward to seeing where you go in future.

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

I agree. Thanks for your support.

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BacKin5Minutes 42 [ 7 years ago ]

Sweet!

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

Thanks.

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Deividas 47 [ 7 years ago ]

The front is pretty neat but the back is a little bleh. I think you could have done more with the back. The description text is far to big, you should decreases size and add more. And also the review ratings could have been altered a little more. Right now they are all the same size and all in a row, which makes the left side empty to the eye, even though it might no be. Also I think the reflection could use a decrease in opacity, but thats just a personal nit pick. All in all though not bad for a first one, and better than most for a first. Keep it up

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

Yeah I agree with all of your feedback. I do have a lot of trouble with developing good backs so I guess I really need to just practise alot more. Also i'll take into consideration the reviews and the opacity of the reflection when I make my next box. Thank you for your feedback, it is appreciated.

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Throavium 1 [ 7 years ago ]

I agree with Deividas, otherwise the colors are good, but the presentation is off, if you're gonna cut the cover into a front, spine, and back like that you should take off the plastic.

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Pleiades 40 [ 7 years ago ]

The front came together nicely, and quickly I might add. I was unsure of the logos placement at first sight, but you adjusted it's colors and lighting well against its surroundings, and likes quite natural.

One thing that immediately stands out to me, on the front, is the shadow placed behind Wake. I don't usually like shadows behind characters unless intentions are to display them against a cardboard backdrop, and even then it's questionable. A subtle glow could still differentiate Wake from his surroundings without him looking flat and two-dimensional. It's also worth noting that the darkness brings out some of the imperfections in rendering the image.

Any comments I could make about the back have already been mentioned by Deividas, and I'd just sound redundant repeating them.

Overall, good work for a first submission.

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

I wasn't going to do the shadow at first but it's a shame I did, I was trying to make it quite subtle but I realise now it does stand out quite a bit. Thank you for your input. ~

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zalayetta 43 [ 7 years ago ]

Gripping!
nice one man, i like it
plz add printable...

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

I'll try and put it up asap! Thanks!

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Higashi89 47 [ 7 years ago ]

The overall design is amazing, but I think you overacted the lightning from Alan's gunshot

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

Thank you!

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Daemon 46 [ 7 years ago ]

Just gorgeous.

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

Thank you! Means alot.

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deadboy 30 [ 7 years ago ]

very nice i love it.

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

Much appreciated!

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Luigi53 30 [ 7 years ago ]

Friggin' awesome.

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

Thank you, friend!

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Bastart 48 [ 7 years ago ]

Great first box and quite original as well (I love the textures and brushes)
Welcome aboard and I'm looking forward to see some more from you ;)

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

Why thank you! ;D

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roza 43 [ 7 years ago ]

That front is amazing. But I do agree the back needs a little tweaking.

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B O M 6 [ 7 years ago ]

Thanks, maybe you could give me some tips for backs sometime. ^^

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ristar 33 [ 7 years ago ]

te agradesco tu aporte, consulta como lo descargo

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mjh 1 [ 7 years ago ]

hi mate very nice design please put the printable

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munhozzshow 1 [ 7 years ago ]

nice

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munhozzshow 1 [ 7 years ago ]

Nice

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