nice drawing attempt, i guess you'll improve your skill with time, it will be worthy for you and your covers!! keep on
PS: i'm french as you and you should give up the spine direction in our french wrong way, i mean when you put down your boxes on a table, how will you like to read the title?
yes that's right, the other way...
I really like the front, especially as you drew it yourself ;) and the face of Dr. Manhattan sitting at the bottom of the spine, is a nice touch.
Like some others alreay said, I'm not a big fan of the back (the screens border and the placement of it, isn't really working with the upper half of the back) and the render of Rorschach isn't as it needs more space around it, so it could do without it imo.
I'd suggest to center the screens box (also try centering the logo's beneath the screen border and move it up a bit, so the logo's have more free space underneath it and don't touch the bottom part of the box) change the border style, get rid of the render in the lower right corner and choose a much lighter font for the synopsis.
I do like the style for the tagline and render of Dr. Manhattan, though ;) I really hope you'll find these suggestions helpfull and accept them as constructive critisism and not in a way to attack the design of your box.
C'est très belle.
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Nice!
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thanks!! :D
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I am liking this because of the front, I think its awesome and you drew it :) not a fan of the back. :)
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La partie "lèvera les yeux et criera" est très difficile à lire. Sinon c'est très sympa ET ça change du simple poster collé sur une boìte, chose que l'on voit ici la plupart du temps.
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epic front
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nice drawing attempt, i guess you'll improve your skill with time, it will be worthy for you and your covers!! keep on
PS: i'm french as you and you should give up the spine direction in our french wrong way, i mean when you put down your boxes on a table, how will you like to read the title?
yes that's right, the other way...
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I really like the front, especially as you drew it yourself ;) and the face of Dr. Manhattan sitting at the bottom of the spine, is a nice touch.
Like some others alreay said, I'm not a big fan of the back (the screens border and the placement of it, isn't really working with the upper half of the back) and the render of Rorschach isn't as it needs more space around it, so it could do without it imo.
I'd suggest to center the screens box (also try centering the logo's beneath the screen border and move it up a bit, so the logo's have more free space underneath it and don't touch the bottom part of the box) change the border style, get rid of the render in the lower right corner and choose a much lighter font for the synopsis.
I do like the style for the tagline and render of Dr. Manhattan, though ;) I really hope you'll find these suggestions helpfull and accept them as constructive critisism and not in a way to attack the design of your box.
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thanks everyone! :)
I really apreciate your critisisms and I've considered it: I just update, the box and all coments are welcomed! :D
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nice update on the back, it looks much better ;)
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J'adore! :) The front looks amazing, great job!
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merci ! :D
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