Good work the back has more structure than normal which is good to see. Good use of headings and sub headings too. There is a bit too much text though. Maybe you could have made the screenshots bigger so that less text was needed
There is way too much text on the back though. Like, WAY too much.
If you were in a shop, and were going to buy a game, but wanted to read the box first, would you stand there and read ALL that text? No, and that's why a shorter amount of text usually works better.
Good work the back has more structure than normal which is good to see. Good use of headings and sub headings too. There is a bit too much text though. Maybe you could have made the screenshots bigger so that less text was needed
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yes. i think you say right. tanx for your help my friend. realy tanx
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again good work
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tanx ajay.
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You getting better
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hay iman. i miss you bro. tanx and tanx
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I like the front a lot.
There is way too much text on the back though. Like, WAY too much.
If you were in a shop, and were going to buy a game, but wanted to read the box first, would you stand there and read ALL that text? No, and that's why a shorter amount of text usually works better.
But, nonetheless, it's a very nice box :)
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yes. you say right. as soon time i fix and update my box but thank you for your Guidance and help. i Compensation that. tanx my bro
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good work
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you are too good desiner
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