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[ Box updated on April 27th, 2015 ] [ original ]
The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess 3D Box Cover Comments
Comment on Moebius's The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess 3D Box Art / Cover.
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[ Box updated on April 27th, 2015 ] [ original ]
Comment on Moebius's The Legend of Zelda: Twilight Princess 3D Box Art / Cover.
That front is absolutely fantastic, but the thing I think really lets this box down is the tagline font and spacing. Otherwise it's a fantastic box.
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What font do you recommend? See if I like it better.
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@Sarashi I agree with this. This well definitely add balance to the back, considering the front is pretty stellar.
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@Sarashi I don't want to cover up Midna with text but I'll try your font, update it when I can. Thanks for all the constructive criticism.
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@Moebius Hmm, I don't really see why you wouldn't, it's a common occurrence on official covers and I think it worked well in that case.
Trying to fit all the text in the gap between Midna and the screenshots is going to make it very cramped and will be a poor usage of space, and in all honesty I don't see it working out well. Perhaps a better compromise would be putting the tagline so that it crosses over her waist and below instead.
I'm aware it is your box, but we only want to give you help that will try and make it as good as we can make it together.
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Pretty good
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I quite like the colour scheme and most of this to be honest. My only issue is unleash the wolf on the back. It seems to be cramped width ways but have quite a lot of space between lines.
Personally I would have unleash the wolf across the top going the whole width one one line. Screenshots below that in a line too. Maybe only 3. Then leave everything else the same.
Maybe just food for thought
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The unleash the wolf tag line is utterly unnecessary, and the terrible font paired with the ugly white drop shadow only makes it worse. The term "Unbury your history." is confusing, and seems like it doesn't make much sense. The story on the back is too descriptive, and lacking in any pacing. The drop shadow around Midna is very tacky, and could use a little more transparency. The buttons on the back don't fit well with the theme, and look like arcade buttons. But that's just my two cents, other than that, this is generally a pretty good looking box that looks like a lot of time and effort went into.
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Nice Job. Thank You For Printable
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