[ Box updated on August 11th, 2010 ] [ original ]
Star Wars Battlefront III Box Cover Comments
Comment on Hazzy25's Star Wars Battlefront III Box Art / Cover.
[ Box updated on August 11th, 2010 ] [ original ]
Comment on Hazzy25's Star Wars Battlefront III Box Art / Cover.
This took me 2 days to complete. please comment.
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1. You can't battle on Alderaan, noob. Alderaan was blown up.
2. You misspelled "vehicles."
3. You don't "drive" the Millenium Falcon. You "pilot" it.
4. You wrote "there" when you meant "their."
5. No developer/publisher logo on the front.
6. Star Wars Battlefront is about the soldiers and infantry fighters--not individual characters. A Clonetrooper, Stormtrooper, or Rebel soldier would be more appropriate on the front.
7. It all looks very thrown together and disorganized.
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#2, Agree with most of the stuff except for number 2, because it depends what war you actually play on Alderaan because it would still be there in the Clone Wars but in the Galactic Civil War it would be blown up.
Next time post your box in the Critique Section.
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Don't mix art styles. You have stuff from the movies and stuff from the games here. Stick with one or the other for a nice consistant theme throughout.
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Thanks for the comments. I'll improve on those things and post a version 2.
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I updated my first box to 3d version
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