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Ratchet and Clank: All 4 One box art cover
By avatar FLYCRAYON 23 on December 2nd, 2011
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FLYCRAYON 23 [ 8 years ago ]

I Was Having Troubles Up-loading This Box And I Had Not Realised That It Had Up-loaded Until Now.

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sd1833 47 [ 8 years ago ]

The front holds potential, but the perspective is in need of fine-tuning. Ratchet should be moved downward, so as to appear standing closer to the viewer, with the other characters farther behind him. Look at Quark's size and position in contrast to Ratchet's. They're practically at equal distance with each other, but Quark is a drastically smaller size. I'd recommend scaling him (Quark) down a few notches to further the illusion of Ratchet standing in front. Nefarious could do with a more prominent position as well.

The back's mood has a significantly different mood and feel compared to the front. A change in color isn't ill-advised, but some elements of the front design seeping into the back can help the box flow a little more fluidly, and be less abrupt in change.

Secondly, the back could use a central synopsis. The features text assigned to each screenshot is fine, but more needs to be added to make this a complete package. You could stand to add a third screenshot as well, possibly in between the other two (at a different angle?), as most covers traditionally have at least three screens. And one minor addition concerning the text; try giving it a bit more flash, maybe in the form of an outer stroke, glow or shadow. This will give the design a bit more character while making the text more legible.

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FLYCRAYON 23 [ 8 years ago ]

Alright thanks for letting me know,also thanks for putting so much effort into your comment!

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