Nice.
I agree with HolyFad that you should enlarge the logo on the front. In addition, there is a typo in the tagline on the back where it says "DEFAT" instead of "DEFEAT". "BECOME LEGEND" sounds kinda weird too, it should be changed to "BECOME A LEGEND" in both the tagline and the synopsis.
I'd say add the characters of the remaining classes behind the main focused 'Guardian' and like already mentioned, enlarge the logo quite a bit (maybe add a small drop shadow/outer glow) The back looks quite official, I'd only suggest to fix the typo's and fill in the ESRB rating.
I like this. My only suggestion would be to enlarge the Destiny logo on the front.
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I'll
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Nice.
I agree with HolyFad that you should enlarge the logo on the front. In addition, there is a typo in the tagline on the back where it says "DEFAT" instead of "DEFEAT". "BECOME LEGEND" sounds kinda weird too, it should be changed to "BECOME A LEGEND" in both the tagline and the synopsis.
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Thanks Nathan soon I'll
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I'd say add the characters of the remaining classes behind the main focused 'Guardian' and like already mentioned, enlarge the logo quite a bit (maybe add a small drop shadow/outer glow) The back looks quite official, I'd only suggest to fix the typo's and fill in the ESRB rating.
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you're welcome
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thanks Guys
this is final HOF so I,m thinking to do some new Boxes
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Sounds good
Me too will be back soon..
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@Mohit Really ?
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